activity of may 2

Find the three sentence fragments. Correct the fragments by (1) changing the punctuation and creating one complete sentence, or (2) adding new words to make the fragment a complete sentence. Post the corrections on your blog.

There were also several differences between Washington and Lincoln. Washington came from a wealthy aristocratic background several years of schooling in the other side Lincoln came from a poor background and had very little schooling,Another difference between the two involved their military role because Washington was a general, a military leader Became a president by other side ,Lincoln never served in the military He was a lawyer who early on became a politician. When he became president he took on the role of commander in chief, as all U.S. presidents do. Despite his lack of military background or training. Lincoln made several strategic decisions that enabled the U.S. military leaders to win the Civil War. Finally, Washington served for two terms and therefore had eight years to accomplish his policies however he was assasinated. out in that time he could not finish some of the things that he wanted for the country.

Find and mark the mistakes (tense, punctuation, word order, preposition, word choice, grammar, missing word(s), spelling ) in the following short biography. Post the corrections on your blog.
Jack Friedhamm was born in New York in October 25 of 1965. He began the school at the age of six and continued until he was 18 years, then he went University of neww jork to learn Medicine He decided Medicine, because he liked biology when he was at school. when he was to University he met his wife Cindy. she was a beautiful woman with long hair blackthen They went along for yeers before they decided getting married. as soon as he graduated to medical he began to work. in their married They had two children that named Jackie and Peter, and have lived in Queens since the past two years. Jack is very interested painting and likes to paint portraits of his sun Peter.

the situation of barranquilla

The actual situation of Barranquilla

LACIDES MORENO BARRAZA

Have you ever been in Barranquilla? This is a common question that people of the others cities ask to the tourist when they visit the country, or have you ever been in the Barranquilla carnivals? It is the most popular question that we ask to the people of the other country or city, but we have to know that now day Barranquilla is not the first, or “the gold of the door of Colombia,” due to the tardiness in the second part of the century XX had been terrible.

Most of people in baranquilla know that the city is in a difficult economic, political and social situation now. the city is fight or sixth in the country, when in 1940 Barranquilla was more important than Bogotá and Medellin and had an excellent economy, due to the boats arrived to the fluvial port in the Magdalena river however, since 1960, the city has been down in it is factories, transport, airport and in general all the things that make a competitive city.

Barranquilla in the last ten years around 20 important factories had been changing their center of production and we do not see these things, but it is a terrible problem because the entrepreneurial sector is very poor and the important businessman do not by the city because they see via 40 that is and important center with a big space alone and see that Barranquilla does not have the same enterprises that it had in 1940. People only send a message to criticism the temperature, the security and say that all is expensive in the shopping center, but they do not reflect themselves are the people that do not help to change the situation because they think that all is “ok” that we do not have serious problems . People in Barranquilla do not have social culture. if you go to the center ,you can see that all the streets have mountains of garbage and the pollution is amazing , however the local administration of the city does not do anything and has a huge percentage of responsibility about the situation of the city.


The city does not have excellent public services in the downtown because the local government has always stolen the money that honest people pay in the taxes, this is not a secret, but political corruption and bad social culture of the barranquilleros has the city in a terrible situation. Another important topic to say is the public education and public health that is the worst after Choco and five other departments, However, most people in Barranquilla think that we are the best city because we have a wonderful carnival that is the cultural patrimonial of the human in the world and we have a good fluvial port in the Magdalena river.

Barranquilla was the first in most of the things that came in Colombia. For example, it was the first that flew an airplane and had a phone and other important things for the progress of a city around 1920 -1930. it had the first important hotel, the Prado in the historical neighborhood the Prado and now a days it has the least percent of violence in the country . This is not all the reason to consider that Barranquilla is the best and that we do not have serious problem in our city.

In conclusion, I do not want to say that baranquilla is the worst because that is not true, but we have to work very hard to recover all the good things that we had in the condition that all the people in the city need to understand that we are not in a excellent situation, we are less than Bogotá, Medellin and Cali are better cities due to the feet that they have more control and organization in their local government. How too the good civil culture of the people apportions to a clean city. The local administration in these cities sends the money of the taxes to repair the streets, hospitals, schools and help the factories and build commercial centers, build and create a good system of public transportation. We have to understand that these things make a better city than the others not the carnival and famous singers, like most of the people guess, we know that is important and very good for the city but the problem is that people think that is the most important. The solution is that we have to create more love for the city for our companies, streets our money that we pay in the tax. We have to work in group and with honest people that do not steal money from people and then we will have successful city, because the city is in a terrible situation.
























CHANNEL TB3 THE PROGRAM PRIMERO BARRANQUILLA

thing that i have to work in class

1 ) i think that i have to work more in grammar points and speaking because o have a poor vucaburary and fluency when i am speaking english and this is not good , because english is the most important in my program.

2 ) i have to pay more attention and be more demandind with myself , because if you are not demandind yopu do not reach your goals in your life . you can not be an inproductive professional .

actittude

the fringe of gaza

do you know what is the sitution in gaza ? it is very possibly that you do not anything , however in these place more than 1 million os palestines have hold up a brutal violence for the israeli trrops ,inocent people like a girls , boys and granfathers , nowadays the police of israel killed 6 palestines with not rason , but the begginnig of these problem is the war that have palestine with israel since the creation in 1948 the state of israel , all the palestine was situted in the fringe of gaza that is a little porciton of land to all the people ( musulmans ,and arabians) .

the situation is really dangerous because all the days the troops of israel made attacts to the people , the fringe of gaza is ubicated in israel united to the mediterrean sea and ,people say that egipt have te power in this zone. if we see the news all the news of the fringe of gaza is a terrible war and the goverment of United States does not do anything and the others organizations that have a huge power in this zone of the world .

the correction of the essay

The effects of the creation of the state of Israel
Lacides Moreno
What happened in Israel? Why they have a war? The answer is simple after the creation of the state of Israel in 1948, when United States and the URRS won the war to the Germany Nazi. Since 1948 the Jews have a territory that was occupied for the Arabs and Palestine, and this is the problem, but the real problem began before the birth of the Jesus Christ.

In 1945 when the second war finalized, United States and Russia give to all the Jews in the world a territory. United States and Russia (the winners of the war) was thinking about giving a space of Argentina, but the Jews said that they want their “Promise Land” ,their real home, because they explained that they go out ,when the Roman Empire was looking for killing because they were a rebellious. Then in the Second World War, more than 5 million Jews died by the Nazis troops. However they were able to create the Zionist movement in order to recuperate Palestine as Israel. Now the big problem is that in all the human history the Palestinians and Arabs had to leave the land.

Since 1948 the effects of the creation of the state of Israel have been terrible, but all the people in the world have a question, Why is United States the savior of the Jews? The answer is simple the condition was that all the petroleum dregs was manage for the United States for this reason United States help to Israel . Obviously the Jews accepted this condition because in the entire human they wished a proper land, but in this moment the Jews had been moving their interests with finance threaten, because the Jews have a billion of dollars in deeds in the multinationals of United States. The problem was for the Palestinians because they didn’t leave the land and all the ex ottoman empire, namely the Arabs community (Syria, tras-jordan, Egypt, Iran and irak) create a huge hate for the United States , now days this is the countries that have more Palestine as a result this countries hold up the palatine they identify we him.

The most important effects since 1948 were the five wars in this territory due to the two different cultural groups are sharing the land. First was the war in 1949 in this war died 600,000 Palestine , the second was the Sinai war In 1956 due to the nationalization of the Suez canal in this war interview , France , Israel , England all united to Egypt . Then the war of the 6 days because of Egypt impede the leaving of the Jews boats in the red sea, next the war of Yom Kippur on account of Syria and Egypt sent a surprise attack to recuperate the Sinai, and finally the war of the libano (1982-1983) when Israel invaded the libano because here was the Palestine troops, but this is not all the wars because all the days we can see in the news the bomb-man, the united states troops, and missiles. Nowadays all the people remark the support of USA to Israel “ bush say that will defend military Israel ” 1° he announce that will be protected the Jews. As a result the war the conflict continue , not because of the united states help the Jew , the conflict is very strong and have a difficult point to resolve for example the religious places the temples that Palestine and Jews have in the same place .

the people have to analyze the direct and the indirect effects of the creation of this state. I have a good reflection that is not a secret, but is important to announce the hate that all the Arab community have for the USA we know that the unites states pay this hate in September of 2001 when passage the cautious of the twin towers it was the Arabian community conduce by Osama bin laden.

This conflict has a economic, politic and sociological interests that impede the solution some people know only two interest of united states, but another countries have other interests that we do not know however, all the days we can see the catastrophic effects of this conflict.


1) THE MILENO NEWSPAPER , march 21 of 2006 Mexico D.C page,
http://www.milenio.com/
in conclusion the creation of Israel had been terrible for many countries in the world , because not only was the five wars if not another effects for example the huge hate that the Arabian community have for united states due to his intervention in the problem, however we don not have to see only the things that happened we have to analyze profoundly because people that will be a professional of international business have to create a impartial culture and study all the interest of the countries due to exist the possibility that some nations create a war for benefices economics , politics , territory …as a result we understand which most of the problem in the world never finish.

the creation of the state of israel

The effects of the creation of the state of Israel

Lacides Moreno


I am going to talk about the situation, after the creation of the state of Israel in 1948, when United States and the URRS won the war to the Germany Nazi. Since 1948 the Jews have a territory that was occupied for the Arabs and Palestine, and this is the problem, but the real problem began before the born of the Jesus father.

In 1945 when the second war finalized, the ONU give to all the Jews in the world a territory, united states and the URRS (the winners of the war) was thinking in give a space of Argentina, but the Jews says that they want his “promise land” his real home, because they explain that they go out when the roman empire was looking for killing because they was a rebellious, then in the II war more than 5 millions of Jews died by the Nazis troops ,however they can create the Zionism movement in order to recuperate Palestine as a Israel , but now the big problem is that in all the human history the Palestine and Arabs had leave the land .

Since 1948 the effects of the creation of the state of Israel had been terrible ‘, but we have a question, why united state is the savior of the Jews? the answer is simple the condition was that all the petroleum dregs was manage for the USA for this reason united states help to Israel ,obviously the Jews accepted this condition because in all the human they wish a proper land, but in this moment the Jews had been moving her interests with finance menaces, because the Jews have a billion of dollars in deeds(OF MONEY) in the multinationals of USA, the problem was for the Palestine because they didn’t leave the land and all the ex ottoman empire, namely the Arabs community (Syria, tras-jordan, Egypt, Iran and irak) create a huge hate for the united states , now days this is the countries that have more Palestine as a result this countries hold up the palatine they identify we him.
The most important effects since 1948 was the 5 war in this territory due to the two different cultural groups are sharing the land. First was the war in 1949 in this war died 600,000 Palestine , the second was the Sinai war In 1956 due to the nationalization of the Suez canal in this war interview , France , Israel , England all united to Egypt . Then the war of the 6 days because of Egypt impede the leaving of the Jews boats in the red sea, next the war of Yom kipus on account of Syria and Egypt send a surprise attack to recuperate the Sinai, and finally the war of the libano (1982. 1983) when Israel invaded the libano because here was the Palestine troops, but this is not all the wars because all the days we can see in the news the bomb-man, the united states troops, the missiles etc.. . now days all the people remark the support of USA to Israel “ bush say that will defend military Israel ” 1° he announce that will be protected the Jews. As a result the war the conflict continue , not because of the united states help the Jew , the conflict is very strong and have a difficult point to resolve for example the religious places the temples that Palestine and Jews have in the same place .
We have to analyze t directs and the indirect effects of the creation of this state. I have a good reflection that is not a secret, but is important to announce the hate that all the Arab community have for the USA we know that the unites states pay this hate in September of 2001 when passage the cautious of the twin towers it was the Arabian community conduce by Osama bin laden.

This conflict have a economic ,politic and sociological interests that impede the solution we know only two interest of united states , but another countries have other interests that we don’t know , however all the days we can see the catastrophic effects of this conflict .


1) THE MILENO NEWSPAPER , march 21 of 2006 Mexico D.C page,
www.milenio.com
in conclusion the creation of Israel had been terrible for many countries in the world , because not only was the 5 or more wars if not another effects for example the huge hate that the Arabian community have for united states due to his intervention in the problem, however we don’t have to see only the things that happened we have to analyze profoundly because we will be a professional of international business and we have to create a impartial culture and study all the interest of the countries due to exist the possibility that some nations create a war for benefices economics , politics , territory etc…as a result we understand which most of the problem i9n the world never finish.

resume of the reading in the web

Resume of the reading in the web


The reading talk about the language that it is our “eye”
in the world , always most of the actions that we do ,
jobs , behavior , perceptions etc … reflects the
powerfully influences of the language.

Definitions of terms Usually all the people create a
stereotypes in their mind , that affect the other people
, the other culture , a different sexual influence (
homosexual , gay ) by other was when we mention , sex
ethnicity , religion ,disability or another
characteristic it is germane with something; for
example the nurse is usually is a girl , the man that
drive the school bus usually a man we stereotypy’s some
jobs , activities , phases, cultures etc.. Genders We
don’t know that we have to be carefully, because when we
say something we don’t if the others feel good our words
could be dangerous for the feelings of the other person.
One problem of gender free is that men and women are
equally battered; fathers can be mothers and mother can
be father both. pseudo genders are thought to include
everyone because the people who are thinking only of
themselves , it explain that all the programs that we
see in the TV , the news is not total true or the real
situation had been changed . Sex gender refers
“masculine” and “feminine” the jobs, etc.. Then the
reading talks about the grammar why we speak with “HE”
or “SHE”? And explain that the correct form is that all
the people could not refer him or her we have to refer
about the human. The history of the language we used
some words of the others countries in the case of United
States they use some French phases and the French do the
same. Now we used the passive voice, use masculine and
feminine pronouns in alternating sentences, paragraphs,
examples etc.. Our language has a lot of biased,
because you can say something that is a shipworm and the
other person can understand in a different form. Then
the text refers about the roles of the man and women in
a little conclusion we have to eliminate “HE or “SHE” we
have to talk about the human; another conclusion is that
we have to eliminate the dangerous phases for example
“the girls didn’t do anything “or “all the man are equal
“because now days some people think that the women
psychologically, sociologically and linguistically are
indefensible. Then the text the role works and the
language that we used, we always say fisherman we
relacionated we a girl, however some jobs we used both
man and women.