my favorite canival memory
my best experience was last year when i was 17 . the day when i went to beer festival i was with my best friends and we a girl that she was not my girlfriend but we did the same that the boyfrirends do it , we went to andres house at 4 pm we listen music and drunk some beers ¡we passed a great time¡ then we went to the festival at 6 or 7 pm i dont remenber in the festival what i did it. but i know that i danced , drunk a lot fall me water beer and "maizena" .
then i dont remenber waht i did iremenber then that i was in the bed of andres house and all ok my friends was smiling because i gave a kiss an ungly girl when natalia went to his home at 3 pm they said . in the morning we went to the beach and ate a big fish because and some beer "because is good to recuperate for headchache" in beach i relax and swinming in the sea an at 4 pm i went to my home ¡ .
another good experience of the carnales was in the " guacherna" but it is pre- carnavales but i feel that is the same this day i passed wonderful i was in the house of a friend in the 44 street i was with my girlfriend in this night we was in the home alone because the father s was not in the home we was crazy because we was in carnivals with a home alone and we a beautiful gilrs well not beautiful but we saw beautiful it was the effect of the cups jajajajaa this day i bought two bottles of something special .

1 Comments:
Lacides--Remember to revise for punctuation and capitalization. You've got a good start here, but you need to reorganize your ideas somewhat so that they're easier to follow.
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