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Find the three sentence fragments. Correct the fragments by (1) changing the punctuation and creating one complete sentence, or (2) adding new words to make the fragment a complete sentence. Post the corrections on your blog.
There were also several differences between Washington and Lincoln. Washington came from a wealthy aristocratic background several years of schooling in the other side Lincoln came from a poor background and had very little schooling,Another difference between the two involved their military role because Washington was a general, a military leader Became a president by other side ,Lincoln never served in the military He was a lawyer who early on became a politician. When he became president he took on the role of commander in chief, as all U.S. presidents do. Despite his lack of military background or training. Lincoln made several strategic decisions that enabled the U.S. military leaders to win the Civil War. Finally, Washington served for two terms and therefore had eight years to accomplish his policies however he was assasinated. out in that time he could not finish some of the things that he wanted for the country.
Find and mark the mistakes (tense, punctuation, word order, preposition, word choice, grammar, missing word(s), spelling ) in the following short biography. Post the corrections on your blog.
Jack Friedhamm was born in New York in October 25 of 1965. He began the school at the age of six and continued until he was 18 years, then he went University of neww jork to learn Medicine He decided Medicine, because he liked biology when he was at school. when he was to University he met his wife Cindy. she was a beautiful woman with long hair blackthen They went along for yeers before they decided getting married. as soon as he graduated to medical he began to work. in their married They had two children that named Jackie and Peter, and have lived in Queens since the past two years. Jack is very interested painting and likes to paint portraits of his sun Peter.
There were also several differences between Washington and Lincoln. Washington came from a wealthy aristocratic background several years of schooling in the other side Lincoln came from a poor background and had very little schooling,Another difference between the two involved their military role because Washington was a general, a military leader Became a president by other side ,Lincoln never served in the military He was a lawyer who early on became a politician. When he became president he took on the role of commander in chief, as all U.S. presidents do. Despite his lack of military background or training. Lincoln made several strategic decisions that enabled the U.S. military leaders to win the Civil War. Finally, Washington served for two terms and therefore had eight years to accomplish his policies however he was assasinated. out in that time he could not finish some of the things that he wanted for the country.
Find and mark the mistakes (tense, punctuation, word order, preposition, word choice, grammar, missing word(s), spelling ) in the following short biography. Post the corrections on your blog.
Jack Friedhamm was born in New York in October 25 of 1965. He began the school at the age of six and continued until he was 18 years, then he went University of neww jork to learn Medicine He decided Medicine, because he liked biology when he was at school. when he was to University he met his wife Cindy. she was a beautiful woman with long hair blackthen They went along for yeers before they decided getting married. as soon as he graduated to medical he began to work. in their married They had two children that named Jackie and Peter, and have lived in Queens since the past two years. Jack is very interested painting and likes to paint portraits of his sun Peter.
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